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Three simple words.

Do you know how simple it would be to say:
“I hate you”
Three words that could end it all but not be true,
Do you know how simple it would be to end it right now?
Three simple words: that’s how.

Is it that I’m shallow, do you think it’s this?
To young and naïve hearted to know what love it.
Am I immature and the fruit that’s bitter?
The girl who doesn’t know what she’s got, till it’s gone.
I guess it’s true but I can’t change what’s done.

Nicola asked me what was wrong and I said:
“I feel like my heart has been ripped out and chewed in front of me,”
But was it broken? Or just guilty?

I can’t believe I yelled and said the things I did,
I should of suppressed my anger, I should of lied!
But this isn’t a poem to say “I should of died,”

This poem is written for the paper to catch my tears,
the safety net for my dreaded fears,
Don’t blame yourself and say you hoped to much,
All you did is love me and nothing’s wrong with that,

Do you know how simple it would be to say:
“I love you,”
Three words that couldn’t fix it all but still be true,
Do you know how simple it would be to end it right now?
Three simple words: That’s how.
©2008-2009 ~CharlotteWindchaser
:iconcharlottewindchaser:

Author's Comments

My god this is such an emoishy poem but i don't care

Wrote this up last night.

Poem by ME (C) so don't steal mine is you fuck up yer own relationships write yer own.

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:iconelemente:
very interesting...very well written. There's a lot of emotion in this piece.

What fueled you to write this?

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=SynDuo :heart: =elemente
December 11, 2004
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Love Humanity, Hate the People
:iconcharlottewindchaser:
8D The gas station

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You can't make people love you- but you can stalk them and hope the best~ Nicola
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Some people are like slinkys...They're useless but they make you smile when you push them down the stairs.
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:iconelemente:
DX That was so terrible...

still made me laugh though XD

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=SynDuo :heart: =elemente
December 11, 2004
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Love Humanity, Hate the People
:iconcharlottewindchaser:
XD Well ask me on MSN and i may tell you my americany friend

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You can't make people love you- but you can stalk them and hope the best~ Nicola
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Some people are like slinkys...They're useless but they make you smile when you push them down the stairs.
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:iconsnazzamatazz:
Om Om Om you ish right,it is emoishy but its gooood :d

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holy ghost, HOLY GHOST!
:iconcharlottewindchaser:
XD That's the OMing all about???


Thank you!

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You can't make people love you- but you can stalk them and hope the best~ Nicola
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Some people are like slinkys...They're useless but they make you smile when you push them down the stairs.
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:iconhyperactiveprower:
Amazing to see someone emoish poem from you =P

Good work anyhow...

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"Why yes deviantArt. We do like kips of the mud variety." - *behindinfinity

Be who you are because those who matter don't care and those who care don't matter. :heart:~
:iconcharlottewindchaser:
8D Thanks a billion

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You can't make people love you- but you can stalk them and hope the best~ Nicola
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Some people are like slinkys...They're useless but they make you smile when you push them down the stairs.
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:icongarzla:
Really good one :] I like it!

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"Tune your mind to the right channel, things get played at a higher scale"

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