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Soul catcher 1
Written by Frankie ©
Based on soul catcher written by jasmine ©

A darkened soul

2 years had past since Charlotte’s little sweetie Nightmare the hedgehog had first entered the world. Things changed ever since his Friend Jasmine mysteriously disappeared from camp at midnight. Rumours from other freedom fighter bases said that she entered robotinicks base on a lone mission, and never left the way she entered. Sent to the edge with determination her closest friends: Charlotte Windchaser, Nightmare, Knuckles and Shadow followed her trails to find out themselves is the rumours were true.

Midnight was closing in the air was harshly cold. Charlotte, Nightmare, Knuckles and Shadow trekked through the deep forest of green. Everything in the forest was big, the trees where the size of skyscrapers, the over hanging branches weaved into each other, leaving only small traces of the full moon moonlight managing to reach the forest floor. It made the clan feel small, and Charlotte even smaller. “Do you really think Jasmine could join Robotnick?” Knuckles asked, lowering his head from a snake like vine. Charlotte shook her head in disagreement, “I couldn’t imagine her even being next to him, let alone joining forces with him” Charlotte shook her head for the second time, “Nah, it would never happen,” soon after, they reached the base entrance, the door was strong steel, with yellow and black stripes along the sides, and a code machine next to it. . They heard a twig snap, the hid behind one of the large trees, and poked the heads round. They saw a black and orange female walk in the base, “She so hates him” Nightmare growled, Charlotte scowled at Nightmare, She entered a code on the black box attached to the wall, the doors shot open, then closed again when she walked in. Shadow walked up to the machine, and typed in a code, a computerised voice came out from the machine, “Voice recognition,” it asked, Shadow cleared his throat, “Robotnick,”
“Voice patterns do not match” it rejected. Shadows eyes lowered and he raised his fist, “let me in now, or I’ll rip out your mechanical brain!”
“No need for voice recognition” the doors zoomed open Charlotte slipped off a bag from a left shoulder and put it on the floor and started rummaging through the bag, She got 3 radios, a headphone set with a radar system attached to it, covering over the eye. Charlotte passed the radios to the boys and put on the headphones. “Right, I’ll go in, if I don’t come back within an hour come looking for me,” Nightmare commanded. “What? Going solo again, Nighty,” She put a concerned face on. Nightmare pulled a face, “Don’t call me Nighty… and I can manage,” Shadow frowned, “Hey, how come you get to go in alone, and I don’t!”
“Just because you want to be a hero for your girlfriend” Nightmare snarled, Shadow grabbed Nightmare by the fuzzy part of his chest, “She is not my girlfriend” He snarled, “Yeah, but you want her to be” The young hedgehog smiled as he choked,
“Now, now ladies, Calm down” Knuckles glared at the two hedgehogs, Shadow rolled his eyes and dropped Nightmare, he hit the floor with force because he was held up high. The 12-year-old hedgier moved his long fringe out of the way and stuck out his tongue. He stood up, brushed him self down, and then entered the base.

“I’ll keep you noted of what’s coming through radar” Charlotte spoke through the radio, he walked for a while, avoiding corridors with robot-guards, “Right, I’m in sector 15,” Nightmare whispered through the microphone. ."Good, now take a left, then turn right, but be careful there are some robots coming your way, make sure they don’t see you!" Nightmare was amused by how weird Charlotte sounded through the radio, “got it” He snuck around a corner, Keeping within the shadows, his ear ####### up as he heard footsteps, He flattened him self out on the wall, breathing heavily, he poked his head around the corner. He saw Jasmine, Her eyes were darkened, and she looked around with no emotion, and walked on in a steady rhythm. “I see her,” Nightmare put the dark grey and black radio close to his mouth. Charlotte flicked back her pink and silver hair,  “good, good. Now follow her, don’t let Jasmine out of your sight. But don’t let her notice you,”
Jasmines ears picked up the sound of the Shadow-look-a-like’s voice. He gulped hard, “I think she’s noticed me,”
“What!?! Well get out of there quick,” She panicked,
“What’s going on?” Knuckles asked and leant over.
“Jasmine’s noticed Nightmare!” She answered, Shadows eyes went long and thin,
“Well tell him to get out of there!”  
“I have” Charlotte scowled.
But Nightmare was to late, the loudness of the 3’s bickering burnt Nightmares ears. Jasmine crushed the microphone, Nightmare was unconscious, “You’re all so perfetic,” She snickered but with no smile. The line went dead, “NIGHTMARE!” Charlotte Shouted with tears streaming down her face. There was no reply…
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Origanlly written by however, i loved the story so much, i wanted to rewrite it. Charity's not in my version, i didn't want her to be XD. Jas' said it was ok to submit this so gdgd. The style of freedom fighter is like the sonic the hedgehog series with Sally, bunnie and so on in.

basic story so far-
2 years since nightmare was created and Jasmine is acting strange by mysteriously disapearing at night. Her friends are demermend to find out what this is all about. So on night they follow her to robotnicks base. Nightmare goes in alone; Charlotte is in contact by radio. But when Nightmare finds Jasmine, things go terriblely wrong.... .dun dun DUUN!

Jasmine belongs to (C)
Charlotte and Nightmare belong to me XDD (C)
Knuckles, Shadow and Robotnick (eggman) belong to Sega (C)
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